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its more about you then your resume atp. Becuse ur resume is fine and more than good enough for calls.
Your other post shows you have poor grammar. I wouldn't respond if you missed spaces after a sentence...
Yup, I am working on it. Does Resume look fine?
As someone of Pakistani descent, I may have some reservations—just kidding LOL.
Resume content looks fine but make sure there are no weird grammar / formatting like your other post. EX: Why are "Successfully" and "Recruited" capitalized for your cricket club?
Hahahha Thanks Man! I will change the Capital R. I ran it through GPT as well. Anything else you could point out? Will work on email
It’s fine, it’d probably help more if u shared ur email that ur sending
That's funny, I know where you go to school cuz I know Gustavo Schwed 😂
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