One More Resume Review

http://www.razume.com/documents/11507

Second time I'm uploading. Took some of the suggestions and made some changes. If you guys could take one more look at it, I'd appreciate it. My work exp, gpa, ec's, all suck but I've been doing a lot of networking and I'm hoping this could be enough to get an interview. I'mm looking at asset management. thanks

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first thought.... if you're going to put periods at the end of your sentences then put them at the end of all of the sentences or at the end of none... be consistent (attention to detail).

second.... are you trying to get into investment banking????

 

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