Over 100 application and only 4 interviews, please critic my improved CV and suggest me how can I improve it better

Hi WSO community,

Background: International student in a French target; Speaks working level French; Targeting M&A and PE internship roles in Paris.

For now I only got interviews from 2 small PE firms, got 1 offer, but I turned it down because another offer but got screwed over by them. If interested you can see the other post of mine. Parts have been marked to keep anonymous.

Please be brutal and I welcome any opinion.

Thanks in advance!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/3thxuybaw3mkcb4/WSO_for…

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