Please Critique My Resume - All advice is welcome

Hey All,

Please critique my resume. All advice is welcome and appreciated.

Updated on Aug 3-2011 http://www.razume.com/doc/3/f0c0e449-fb3a-4b63-a0…

Thanks.

Note: I kept my high school school because it was a prep school in the north east. Think below Exeter and Andover. I thought it could help.

4 Comments
 

SAT depends on which firm you apply to (maybe in maybe out), Id make your headers bigger by a little (like experience) and company, (+2 font, +1 font size), key thing is your descriptions, add more result oriented, numbers, etc stuff, be more specific, will make a big diff

 

So would it be fine to dump the activities together like this...

Activities: Captain of X, Founder of Y, News Editor of Z?

Or would it be better to say

Activities & Leadership: Captain of X, Founder of Y, News Editor of Z, College Tutor, and Lifeguard

I figure with bigger font and experience for this fall I will be fine with filling up the whole page.

Thanks for the quick responses so far! I'll try to post a more updated version later.

 

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