Get rid of all of the periods at the end of your bullets
I'd probably get rid of your address at the top of your resume, keep it to Name with Phone number and email beneath
I would probably try to add one more bullet to each of your work experiences. Seeing only 2 bullets can possibly give the impression that you really didn't do that much in your roles. Three bullets is pretty safe in my opinion

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