Please review my resume- Any help appreciated!

Hi, I'm applying for Finance Analyst positions for this summer and would like to get my resume reviewed. Any comments/suggestions would be appreciated.

Here's the link: http://www.razume.com/documents/18575

Thanks!

2 Comments
 

I would recommend taking out the cashier/supervisor role. Instead, build on your education such as relevant courses.

"Tutored students in Intro to Financial Accounting". Possibly change to "Tutored students in introductory level financial accounting".

You don't have to expand on MS Office, your interviewer will know what it is

Regarding your interests, cooking and reading is boring! Jiu jitsu and muay thai is exciting! Perhaps expand a little bit about your credentials (black belt equivalents, etc)

Also, consider revamping your bullet points in regards to your work experience; the first work experience you have 3 types of bullets, the second only 1. Try to keep consistency

Good luck

 

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