Please tear apart my Freshman resume!!!!!!
Used the WSO template so formatting shouldn't be too much of an issue. Moreso looking for advice on content, sentence structure, etc.
Although I did my best to make the mock resume as anonymous as possible, I felt the need to include certain elements just to see if the wording/structure is okay.
Not much relevant exp. at the moment, so hoping this resume is good enough to land me a placement this summer. Thanks in advance for any help/insight offered!
| Attachment | Size |
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| mock resume.doc 73 KB | 73 KB |
Since all of your other verbs are past tense, 'Lead' should be 'Led' (you did that twice). Also, could be a Canadian thing, but what's up with switching between 'and' and '&'?
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