Please trash my resume

I have tried to maximize 'white space' and minimize BS. Any advice would be greatly appreciated, no matter how harsh. Sincere thanks in advance. I am primarily seeking internships.

http://www.razume.com/documents/18085

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I really appreciate your help.

1) We don't yet have any grades, as we will be taking cumulative exams in April and then a separate third trimester with exams in July. Ultimately, I will receive a Distinction, Merit, Pass or Fail. 2) Actually, I had a question regarding my thesis. It's title is "An Economic Examination of US Drug Policy" (mainly inspired by a 2009 cover-story from The Economist; as such I didn't think it would be deemed too "radical"). Friends have suggested to leave it out, as it may be perceived inappropriate. As you alluded, I agree citing the thesis - but not its title - is incomplete. Would you suggest taking out the reference entirely, or inserting the title? 3) I am mainly seeking opportunities in DC or NY. Any guidance on the resume has come from a UK perspective (in particular, Oxford insisted the 'Other Interests' section is a must-have, though I am somewhat skeptical of that).

 

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