So a couple days ago I posted my resume here for junior S&T SA and got a lot of helpful feedback. I really appreciate it.
Based on these feedbacks, I made some changes to my resume in two directions (because I got various advices from different people). I am actually not exactly sure if I improved it or made it worse so I am including my original resume here.
Background: Semi-target, Engineering major, did market technology internship at BB commodities arm sophomore year.
Original resume: Includes all experiences, coursework, most detailed, use of sub-bullets, (dont worry about the right alignment), examples http://www.razume.com/documents/12666
Revision 1: Removed (ir)relevant coursework section, slightly less detailed, removed sub-bullets and incorporated on original bullets, removed unnecessary examples, added whitespace http://www.razume.com/documents/12725
Revision 2: Removed irrelevant computer camp experience, removed coursework, even less detailed, remove sub-bullets and turned some of them into new bullets, increased margins and text size, added whitespace. http://www.razume.com/documents/12743
It would be great if you guys could comment on which one you think is the best out of the 3. Also would appreciate it if you could comment on how to improve the one you selected. Would love to hear opinions on my candidacy.
Thanks and really really appreciate it.
Are you sure you want to keep the 650 verbal score on there? Its really not that good a score.
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bump, trying to make Dec 1st deadline for a few hedge funds
re above: Would it be wierd to just list math score?
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