Recent Resume Update - Please Help

I have posted this on here before and was given some great advice. I recently added the the consulting position to it and would be very appreciative if some members on here could give me some constructive criticism.

Thank you

UPDATED 8/23 :

http://www.razume.com/documents/27194

3 Comments
 

your font looks abnormally large, and im assuming its that way because you just want to fill up space. at least at first glance thats what I notice. your statements are really vague. people like details, and details make you sound like you actually know what you are talking about. your gpa isnt the best... maybe include major gpa if it is better? a 3.2 is a huge turnoff and auto ding at many places.

 
oR3DL1N3oyour font looks abnormally large, and im assuming its that way because you just want to fill up space. at least at first glance thats what I notice. your statements are really vague. people like details, and details make you sound like you actually know what you are talking about. your gpa isnt the best... maybe include major gpa if it is better? a 3.2 is a huge turnoff and auto ding at many places.

Thank you for the comments. I know the GPA is not good but everyone I talk to say that the employers will assume that it is much worse if I don't include it at all. My major GPA was almost the exact same.

I am going to work on this tonight and re-post.

Also, when is it appropriate to change .edu email address?

Opstar lifestyle, might not make it
 

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