Resume Critique - Goal is to land a position in consulting

My goal is to land a position in management consulting. Please feel free to tear this apart - looking to improve wherever possible. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated!
Thank you for all your help.

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To name a few: - too wordy - the space (usually a tab) between the bullet points and the descriptions are not always the same - Winning team member, does it mean that you were the member who won within your team or member of the winning team, I find it a bit confusing but I am no native so the others should know better. - I like to put the courses I took, to show the recruiters that I picked finance related courses - You only have three sections, the two first - ok, but the third may need to be split into 2 (at least) sections like extra curricular, interest or skills - If I were you I would mention any second languages to can speak correctly, my computer skills and some hobbies

That's only my (continental european) opinion

Best of luck,

 

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