Resume Critique - (Please) Let me have it

Hey,

I'd greatly appreciate it if you guys could give me some feedback on my resume!

Some background:
I go to a non-target school for finance, however, it is a target school for accounting. I'm in a co-op program and am hoping to land either an analyst position in my first co-op term (hence the name). If I can't, then I'll be aiming the rest of my efforts towards a big 4 accounting firm or something close.

I will also be adding more courses to my resume when applying for co-op (applied finance, and managerial finance, data mining).

Thanks,

optimistic af

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You need more numbers. Can you quantify your experiences? How big were your projects? I can't really put things in context.

Work on formatting a little more. Line spacing looks off.

 

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