Resume Critique Please - Relevant background

The resume' looks good and since you'll be applying for a summer bank internship, the thing that they will look at are your previous work and a particular set of skills.

take out occ, noone gets impressed by "one year transfer" and your cc gpa. ppl assume it's ez.

put all your relevant course work under ucla

if you dont list your ucla gpa, it will be assumed bad

drop your bible stuff

your language is a joke

go register the internship class and interview a pwm.

Add your GPA at UCLA

"Renovating houses with new hardware" lol

better than most...in addition to what the others said:

one of your work experience lines is misaligned put the most recent one on top instead of the bottom "despite large age differences"? take this out just use your title, you don't have to describe the company in assets, not of assets put an extra 0 after the 4.0

Thank you everyone the input. My current GPA is terrible, as it was my first quarter at UCLA. However, I am waiting for my winter quarter grades to kick in to put my UCLA GPA on my resume.

How is my language a joke? I will be removing bible studies and will be securing a PWM internship this quarter.

Thanks once again!

Yo so my first impression was you have only one thing I would care about which is the RE thing you did so make that perfect.