Resume help please - Insights?

Haven't been getting a lot of replies to my applications and was hoping you guys had some insight on why. I don't really care if you know who I am. I'm in college. Who the hell cares. Resume is attached. Be as critical as possible. Thank you!

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Could be just me, but I was thrown off by the lack of separate sections. Try to make it look a bit more tidy; exclude some information, add different sections for Education, Hobbies, Skills, Experience, etc. I see the bullet points but find them insufficient. Good luck!

P.S. Currently having trouble with the exact same thing - making my resume look appealing - so I'm familiar with the frustration.

 

Formatting is your number one concern. There is a ton of white space because basically everything you have listed is vertically formatted with bullet points instead of listing horizontally with commas.

Go through other examples of resumes that have been posted on this site and incorporate the formatting you see, most likely being the Mergers & Inquisitions template. Fellow monkeys will be much more willing to give you advice if they see that you have made a substantial effort yourself before posting.

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