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Please review my resume, any and all feedback welcome. Looking to move to a AM firm, etc. Through networking asked to provide resume to firm for interview.

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TorontoMonkey1328

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Consider adding address
Second bullet under Small Firm, ending that line with including (and a small hyphen) is driving me crazy
Bullets aren't aligned under selected transaction experience (if that is intentional to be demoted relative to previous then change the bullet type)
Not a huge fan of the italics for select transaction experience. Makes it hard to read, when the reader should probably pay more attention here
I'd write out numbers less than 10. "Referred two new clients to firm"
Head coach role has no month for starting date
You co-owned an Event production company? How much did you make. Not really interested in SWOT analysis for this
You use a lot of "&" towards the end. Looks a bit lazy

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Thank you very much for your comments, much appreciated! +1

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