Resume Review for a Private Equity Internship

Hi Guys, I am trying to apply for an internship in private equity or investment banking and i did a CV but I need your review and please be harsh. Thanks in advance guys. Have a nice day

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My first advice would be to delete your name and other information like that from this attachment. Keep it anonymous. As for the Resume, I am certainly not as experienced as some of the other guys here, but I think you should delete the first part "personal details" from it and keep your Resume on 1 page max. Also languages take a lot of space, probably should trim it. In Interests change "und" to "and". Just my 2 cents, hope it helped you. Btw, do you want to work in Germany?

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