Resume Review - Hope you can comment
Hi guys, I have updated my resume and I hope you can comment on it.
Thanks for yuor help!
Hi guys, I have updated my resume and I hope you can comment on it.
Thanks for yuor help!
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Ditch the "Dynamic and motivated..."
Lose the HS diploma
Do you have any completed deals you could discuss from FT? How did you contribute to the two during your SA?
Lose "Select Contributions" - everyone gets that you're not listing everything.
I don't think Webhosting should be capitalized
Usually don't post here, but I'd consider leaving high school diploma on, simply because you went to high school in Poland, which does not appear anywhere else. If you happen to someone review your resume or interview you that is from Poland (or has parents from Poland), that could help you stick out.
And it's not like you're strapped for space, either. I'd probably leave it.
Also, bullets generally don't have periods at the end.
I think that you might want to include "results" of your actions on your bullets, there seems to be a lot of white space at the end of most lines
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