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With a 3.9 from those schools you could have fingerpainting on your resume and you'll get interviews...
i highly doubt you can fluently write hindi AND urdu. had a pakistani buddy that got called on that, tread carefully
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I revised my post with more comments. See above.
are you an Injun bro?
**Education:
Not sure you need to mention the school from which you transferred. Check with someone on this.
Take off SAT unless it's required; it looks very mediocre compared to your solid GPA. If you are going to include it, required or otherwise, break out the Math score, if it is 730+.
**Professional Experience:
Experience line items should begin with a past tense verb. I.e., "Posted accounts receivable..." instead of "Posting..."
Think of more experience line items. Too brief.
**Leadership & Interests:
"Selected as youth leader..." piece seems long & wordy.
19 over on the Black course is not astounding. It is "Bethpage Black Course" (no hyphen). Also, I don't think anyone would care that it's the 6th hardest per Golf Digest -- especially all of the senior bankers who are members at expensive private clubs (Bethpage is public). If you feel compelled to note how special it is, try "US Open, 2002 & 2009"
I would say simply "endurance swimmer" vs "recreational endurance swimmer." It's truthful, and doesn't qualify your ability.
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You misspelled Golf Digest.
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