Resume review - IBD Summer internship '011 - London

Hi monkeys,

i'm planning to apply to IBD summer internships in London. My background might be weak, but i'm primarly looking for advice on grammar or words mistakes as english is not my mothertongue. Any insight on the content itself will also be welcome!

http://www.razume.com/documents/16828

EDIT: new resume here : http://www.razume.com/documents/16850

thx a lot

4 Comments
 

Third bullet under airport analyzed options available...for three xray equipment - need to rectify plural parts of speech ie analyzed options for three pieces of xray equipment

Third section under experience "In Charge for Scholarships" should be in charge "of" scholarships

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Best Response
  1. you have that sponsorship thing in two sections, remove it from the bottom
  2. put how much money you raised as sponsor officer
  3. take away periods from the end of bullets
  4. Created and developed sounds weird, choose one 5.Put dates instead of fall/summer - use Jun 09 - Sep 09 for example
  5. Remove the 2006-08 education piece, wastes space
  6. Implement your relevant coursework a bit more seamlessly into the education section 8.This might be a weird point, but for purely aesthetic reasons, make the work experience section bigger and the education section smaller, it will be a lot more appealing to look at.
 

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