Resume Review - Looking for new job
Hi, I'm currently working in an Investment Bank but looking for a new job. Hope you guys can help me with my cv.
Thanks in advance
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Well for one, some bullets end in periods and others don't - you might want to fix that.
thanks! anything else?
Well, I'd lose the bullshit at the top. No need to say you're "team focused." Add a bit to your college if you have some honors, lose high school. I'm pretty sure everyone had a high school diploma, it isn't adding value unless it is a new england prep school, in which case you'd have some honors to put down because everyone does.
Put June 2008-Present instead of a blank space.
Make your IBD experience more results orientated. How did you contribute?
Don't put down that you participated in calls and transcribed minutes. What are you, a secretary?
listing Office, XP and OS X as skills is, to paraphrase dosk, like saying you're capable of breathing
You're trying to get a job, not a date, there's no reason your resume needs to be so anorexic.
alligator09,
Are you looking to stay in finance?
Not quite sure why you have your high school diploma listed; unless you're from some incredible private academy.
The points about your experience in banking are pretty weak! After looking over this thoroughly I can't tell if this is a joke or not. The first bullets of your internship and Full-time experience are identical. Can't you think of something different?
"Due diligence" - way over used.
"Transcribed minutes of conference calls" - huh? I'm glad you can type.
I'd be happy to help out. PM me.
I don't know if it's just the way it formats on Razume, but it looks like you have 2-3 spaces between some words which I don't see why you would do.
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