Resume Review Request

Just to give a little background, I am currently slated to start at a tier 2 consulting firm in February but am interested in spending a few months in California working for a startup in the meantime (just graduated in May). I would appreciate if a few people could look over my resume for general feedback and to make sure I didn't miss anything before I send it out.

A few things I had questions on... Is that okay how I formatted the multiple date ranges for the first position, or does anyone have any better ideas? Also, what do you think about ordering my work experience by relevance/prestige (e.g., BB first) instead of chronologically?

http://www.razume.com/documents/27394

Thanks in advance.

7 Comments
 

The most relevant experience should be first. It should be BB, student fund - then w.e.

Where the heck did you go to school that a 3.94 is magna cum laude??? That many kids do well at your school that all the honor designations are moved up.

P.S. Next time use rezume, no one wants to download anything.

 

Thanks for the feedback. I went ahead and reordered the work experience and uploaded the resume here as well as on Razume.

I went to a state school with GPA inflation (average GPA is around 3.5).

 

Formatting is superb, you just need to beef that shit up.

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