Review IBD SA bullet points-Thoughts? Open to any Barack

EXPERIENCE
Random Botique Investment Bank Anywhere, USA
Investment Banking Summer Analyst May-July 2013
• Actively supported senior bankers by providing deliverables and determinant data for mandates primarily in the for-profit education sector
• Traveled to Indianapolis with deal team to assist in the process of gathering information for the due diligence of a company for sale
• Created sum of parts valuation models to value assets of companies for possible sales or acquisitions
• Compiled and analyzed a master database of potential Private Equity buyers and targets to increase group efficiency and recognize trends in the sector as well as opportunities for clients

Just need help fixing my most recent internship experience on my resume.

2 Comments
 

Bullet points should start with an action verb. Always. For your first, you start with a adverb, then a passive verb. Say "Provided deliverable... " and end with "to support senior bankers".

I would put your third bullet first. Lead with valuation/modeling experience.

Try to provide some tangible results. What'd your SOTP analysis show - how? Did your database lead to the contacting of 2 buyers of 8? Try to quantify as much as possible, but always show what you accomplished - otherwise, whats the point of having it on your resume?

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