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Damn, now THAT is a resume :o
"Banking - It is what it is"
-fix dates for your boutique bank experience -why is there a blank line before bullet points for energy position? -knowledge of dreamweaver and html do not belong on a banking resume. you can also probably get rid of your ap scholar with distinction and aime participant. that was in high school and isnt even that impressive -needs more focus on numbers and results when describing experiences -"reading books about investment banking" as an interest? no. don't be that guy.
doing math problems? really?
You need to clean up the formatting
I'd leave Dreamweaver/HTML, if you have nothing else to put there why not?
I wouldn't take the GPAs out to different decimal places. If you're listing your major GPAs as 4.0, list your cum as 3.7 not 3.71
Why do you have SAT II and not SAT? That is questionable. I've never seen anyone ask for SAT II.
I abhor your section heading font. Not sure where you came up with that idea.
I'd move skills to the bottom
No, the GS experience doesn't stand out. I think you can combine some of your other honors to one line so you can highlight GS more
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