rip apart my resume please - Canadian University student resume
Hi
I am a third year BBA (starting sept 2014) at a semi-target canadian university looking to secure an equiry research or investment banking summer job next year.
Please critque on the formatting, job description and overall look of it and how it is. Side note question, is it a good idea to bring my resume when I have coffee chats with alumni who are currently in the capital markets?
Thank you!!
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before i add comments, just a question: were you struggling to add, or cut, in this version of your resume?
I am not looking to add or cut, just improving on what is there (grammar and such)
Looks almost identical to WSO format. Don't know if you used it as a template or not but format likes fine to me.
bump
LOL P90X as an interest.
Good for you man.
lol should that be taken out?
My train of thought is that if you're not jacked, then you shouldn't be anything like that in.
I'm not in the position to tell you whether it should be taken out or not; just think how the interviewer would react when seeing that.
Im pretty jacked :D
Then go right ahead and put that in.
Be prepared to explain what it is though; a senior banker might have no clue what it is
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