Rip her up please (Resume Critique)

I'm applying for a few summer internships for some BB and MM firms that will be conducting on campus interviews in the coming months (none are for IB). I already have a summer internship for a midwest PWM firm with $9 billion AUM as an Investment Research Analyst, but I'd like to see if I can get something better.

So if you'd like, critique my resume. I know it needs some work.

Side note: I haven't been able to do many extracurriculars due to the medical reasons for the medical discharge from the military.

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Haha, these thread titles are starting to sound like those bizarre spam emails that intrigue you with something ridiculous so that you are tempted to click and open. By the way, is that your name in the PDF title? Just htought I'd point that out in case you didn't notice...

 

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