Rip her up please (Resume Critique)

I'm applying for a few summer internships for some BB and MM firms that will be conducting on campus interviews in the coming months (none are for IB). I already have a summer internship for a midwest PWM firm with $9 billion AUM as an Investment Research Analyst, but I'd like to see if I can get something better.

So if you'd like, critique my resume. I know it needs some work.

Side note: I haven't been able to do many extracurriculars due to the medical reasons for the medical discharge from the military.

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