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That achievements/activities section is way too disorganized. I can tell you're trying to make it chronological but it just comes off as confusing. A few of those items could probably be expanded to fit into your experiences section; others can be combined so they're not taking up so many lines. Short and sweet for the activities/interests section.
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take the highschool gpa off and for achievements/activities just list few. also, add a interests section. and put your email and number on the same line and save some space
Horrible format
Go use Brian's template
It's fine to put the SAT score on.
Definitely clean up the Achievements section. I'd take the magazine/newspaper gig and move it up into the Experiences section. Then remove most of the bullets from when you were in high school.
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