Rising undergrad sophomore CV for Fall Intern

Needs a lot more detail.

Lab Assistant - Increased efficiency by how much (%)? - What kind of scientific abstracts? What topics were they under? - How many people did you train?

Local Academy teacher - Second bullet point sounds bad, try and fix it - How many individual lesson plans did u create?

Waiter - More info on restaurant. How many covers per night? Did you generate additional revenue through upselling?

Thank you for such a quick response. I'm working on those changes now. Is it bad to have two lines of text under a bullet point? From the resumes I've seen they're usually kept very short.

Comments: - Inconsistent date formatting between your educational experience and the rest. Please change "5/2008" to "May 2008" and "Expected 2012" to "Expected May 2012" - Did I read that correctly? "Super" Honor Roll? - Under your lab experience: "Classified and assimilated knowledge"? Really now? It's quite a fancy way to describe "reading" isn't it? That just looks funny, please remove or find some other way to describe it. Try "Organized and extracted research data from (how many) sources etc." - Some spacing between your experiences please. At least 8pt perhaps. - Absolutely use past tense for your action verbs under the NSF - School Chapter experience. You did them anyway, didn't you? - How many $$ did you raise for the Asian Youth Center? - Formatting is okay in general. You just need lots of work on descriptions

Thanks! I've revamped a lot of the descriptions and put the new link on top. Is the bottom awards/additional part unnecessary and is this resume decent enough to get me a sophomore internship?