Roast my CV - 2021 SA Sales & Trading London

Hi monkeys,

I'm interested in the Sales side of S & T and will be applying for 2021 SA positions within Sales & Trading in London.

Any and all criticism and feedback is very much appreciated - please roast my CV!

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mandungus

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Nordic Hardo

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Put Education first.
Put grades from IB degree, the fact that you haven't listed means they are crap. Are the ones listed High level or standard?
Put graduation date on education, not present.
Put location on experience.
There are formatting errors,
mention if the internships are part-time - they appears to be so but its not listed.
You go barely any ECs achievements,
A lot of inconsistency in formatting, under "IB" education, your bullet point is smaller than the rest for instance
write time line of your IB degree, 2014-2016?

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