Shit on my resume (college)

• What is GPR? Sarcasm but glaringly dumb mistake to have near the top of your resume.
• H.S. GPA / quartile does not serve any purpose in my opinion. Keep the distinguished program bit and consider adding any other recognition (e.g. scholarship, academic award).
• Edit BA to concentration in finance as opposed to emphasis towards finance.
• The resume needs better spacing. Have a space after section titles (e.g. Education), the Texas A&M section, and each internship.
• You have too many bullet points and the sentences are too short so consolidate into longer ones. You don't need four bullet points to explain a hosting job.
• Why do the bullet points not run across the entire page? The formatting is bad.
• Remove French Cafe. Consolidate Barton Creek responsibilities into two lines.
• I don't like how Education, Experience, etc. is centered. I would prefer to be on the left.
• Everyone knows Windows OP and Microsoft Office. Knowing Word in 2015 is not a technical skill.
• Be more descriptive about your coding knowledge. I suggest to add projects. And be honest in your competency.
• You have poor attention to detail. Your dates formatting is all f*-ed up. Sometimes you spell out the full month and other times you just write "Jan". You have commas where you don't need them. You have extra spaces throughout your text.
• If you have a Spanish sounding name you can remove the language fluency bit if you run out of space.

Your writing needs improvement. Consult with the career services office to help draft a new version. And improve that GPR (kidding about the typo)!