Shit on my resume (college)
I am a freshman in College at Mays Business School, looking to transfer out to a target school Junior year, I am looking to improve my resume for when I am applying for internships & programs in the near future.
Any critique, insults, and advice is welcome, especially on what activities I should get involved in,
Thanks
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At this point, improve your GPA/GPR for your transfer application. Nice job building up the finance experience, keep it up. You can remove your Windows OS skill since that does not matter much. State the business school name and you can perhaps omit the "emphasis towards finance". You can actually say "finance specialization" instead. Good start otherwise.
Why do you want to transfer? What're your end goals?
Your bullets under experience cut off and go to the next line too early - make them like the bullets under activities (continue them through the whole line). If you're just doing it to fill space, I'd still make that change and then just increase the line spacing between bullets slightly. Also, just say Top Quartile or Top 25%, not both, and align dates (your first one under experience is off to the left).
I would get rid of dishwasher experiense furthermore you've got some relevant experience. And also you better remove "proficiend in windows", because it's just silly. Regarding activities, try to get involved into any activities that at least seems serious
Get rid of the "Technical Skills," the whole proficient in Windows, excel,...etc. is expected, if you grew up in the 2000s you should know how to work a computer. Additionally, I would only post a GPA if it is above 3.5
love me some Stubbs BBQ
Just out of curiosity, how did you get that internship before you even started college especially without any business courses taken? I also go to A&M btw but transferring to UConn-Storrs
Your writing needs improvement. Consult with the career services office to help draft a new version. And improve that GPR (kidding about the typo)!
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