Sophomore looking for a summer internship need someone to critique my resume/cv

Hey guys I'm currently looking for a finance internship for the summer of 2012. I've been lurking on indeed.com and internships.com lately. The economy is still pretty hectic and I've been networking with people in the finance field to help me out. I had my cover letter and resume checked by my career office at school but I worked on it significantly since then. I need your input. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Resume:

http://www.razume.com/documents/23809

cover letter:

http://www.razume.com/documents/23811

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