Sophomore Resume review - Resume for accounting or finance internship
Here is my resume for accounting or finance internships( idc which types.. just any lol) Please critique my resume. thanks!
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To start off:
Best of luck.
Ok i have updated it. Can you look at it again? I think the margins are fine and I don't think at this point i need to divide into leadership. Unless you can give me some more ideas.
Thanks,
bummp
You really need to work on the descriptions, especially those about your work experience.Take a look at these resumes and notice how they're more impact-oriented. It's less about the steps or description of what you did and more about what your direct impact was. It can be quantitative (ex. $) or qualitative (ex. increase in efficiency).
http://kelley.iu.edu/IBN/Members/memberViewForm_1.cfm?gradYear=2014&aff…
Also, widen your margins to 1 inch. And don't use pronouns in your writing.
For the headers: Instead of "Education:" write "EDUCATION" (that goes for all of them).
Can you elaborate on any on-campus activities? Have you joined any business organizations or finance clubs? Notice how the Kelley kids from the link mention their frats/sororities, investment clubs, sport teams, etc.
Some of the resumes posted above in that link are not exactly great. Take a look at the 2013 resumes, not the 2014.
Yup, the senior class has better developed resumes/experience.
http://kelley.iu.edu/IBN/Members/memberViewForm_1.cfm?gradYear=2013&aff…
Honestly, there are only one or two resumes in the 2014 class that impressed me. Most of them haven't even had any proper internships.
Care to help the OP? Maybe giving him some feedback would be helpful.
^ And which one or two would those be?
Do any other schools post up these resumes? Most of the resumes there are not ideal examples.
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