S&T Resume looking for feedback

Just looking for some feedback on my resume. Some info I didn't bother to black out because I'd end up blacking out the bullets as well. I currently work as an unpaid intern at a satellite branch of a boutique broker dealer. I'm doing this to network and beef up my resume. I went to a non target school and am six months out of college trying to get into S&T. Razume has altered the resume in that the bullet points are off and now it is two pages. Thanks in advance for the feedback.

http://www.razume.com/documents/18167

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guys, he clearly told you that it was one page before the web site made it two pages. do you guys even read the post or do you just click on the link?

Education should be higher, and you look like you have some strong background, it's surprising that you're having a tough time breaking in.

 

Really just looking for input on my bullets. Sorry about the formatting issues but I assure you its really one page. My school is non target so sending my resume into HR is like throwing it at a black hole. Networking seems to be the right way to go at this point.

 

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