Tear my resume up

I'm looking to get some feed back on my resume. a little background. go to a non target in philadelphia, pretty well regarded regionally but not a huge presence in high finance. im in the honors college, econ major, two internships at a very well regarded trading firm. please tear it apart let me know what needs to be changes, if anything looks/sounds odd etc... thanks everyone

http://www.razume.com/documents/20861

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^^ What he said.

Btw, I can tell you go to Drexel :)

There's a guy who posts here (Drexelalum) who might be able to give you some good advice as to where Drexel places.

 

thanks guys I appreciate the feedback

any thoughts on the beer brewing as an interest? i dont want to come off as an alcoholic or anything but i figured it was something different and would be a good conversation piece

@ Markhobbus margins are a function of the razume upload in work they are .5 all the way around

as far as the employement dates look into the drexel co-op program it runs year round where as half of the ug population is on co-op from sept to march and the other half is in class then they switch.

 

make decimal points consistent for GPA dash length for dublin is not consistent with others indents look weird under skills section make staff accountant bullets consistent with all others (begin with verb in past tense) more details for trading position

 
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