I need some resume help and was looking at the WSO community to help me out. I'm an Operations Analyst at a BB. However, it seems that the transitions/exit opportunities aren't too great at the office I'm sitting at. I'm considering other opportunities, and would do anything to get an FO position in any IBD/PE/HF firms. Please let me know if my current resume will get me to where I want to be.
Thank you
I cannot reply to the question whether you will make it or not but at least my opinion is that you have an outstanding resume which is way better than the average applicant's one. Try hard, network hard and be a convincing and honest person and your chances will increase dramatically.
Good luck =)
There is so much content in your resume. It was really boring to read. Way to many filler words.
I would clean it up, simplify it, make it more compelling and interesting.
Thank you guys, appreciate the feedback
work on your formatting. only looked at it for a minute and a couple things.
1) extraneous comma after travel at the bottom 2) you switch between oxford comma and lack of one. pick one style 3) no space between experience and activities sections while there is one between activities and skills 4) why commas after firm names? 5) your university graduation date should be right aligned like all other dates. the font also looks like it's different in that section, obviously use same font everywhere 6) you abbreviate august for some reason and no other month names
You are a badass, thank you! This is a rough draft, need to make grammar/formatting changes. I was looking more for content critique. But, your suggestions will definitely help me out.
Oh sure, but the majority of a junior banker's job is formatting shit. This kind of stuff will leave a huge negative impression if picked up, and trust me, it will get picked up. Potentially a deal breaker if there are enough mistakes
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