Trade Model(s) for SA Resume Feedback

Have a younger cousin in his jr at school. He's looking to try to make a run at getting into banking, asked if I'd look over his resume doc. His res. is pretty much soup sandwich aside from having a pretty decent GPA, and I honestly couldn't come up with anything for him other than reformatting.

I haven't done this in a while and don't have any other ideas for him, but he's my buddy and want to help. Have a pretty decent library of ibd / PE models I've picked up over the years...would be willing to do some horse trading for a decent mark-up if anyone's interested.

Lemme know, docs attached