What do you think of my resume?

http://www.scribd.com/doc/104433428/Yooooo

I'm getting laid off from my job in September so I figure its time to tweek it. My focus is more on the wording itself then the actual layout. When i uploaded this from Microsoft work to scribd, it messed up the layout so disregard that. For example my actual resume is just 1 page long.

Do you think I could make it more concise? Expand parts more? any thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

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What do you want to do in the future? IBD? S&T? So far, your resume is mediocre: experience isnt relevant enough to finance and your GPA isnt that great. I say, figure out first what you want to do, network and start off small.

 

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guccibrohttp://www.scribd.com/doc/104433428/Yooooo

I'm getting laid off from my job in September so I figure its time to tweek it. My focus is more on the wording itself then the actual layout. When i uploaded this from Microsoft work to scribd, it messed up the layout so disregard that. For example my actual resume is just 1 page long.

Do you think I could make it more concise? Expand parts more? any thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

As your resume looks to be pretty basic and just beginning, I suggest you rewrite it with the following tips & tricks. Here is a link http://www.lifeclever.com/give-your-resume-a-face-lift/ If you have decent MS Word experience it won't be too hard. It took me a few hours to rewrite my 2 page resume with all this formatting and people think it was done by a professional but when I tell them that I did it they are really impressed. They even supply a template you can use now to put in your information if that is easier.

Good luck!

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guccibrohttp://www.scribd.com/doc/104433428/Yooooo

I'm getting laid off from my job in September so I figure its time to tweek it. My focus is more on the wording itself then the actual layout. When i uploaded this from Microsoft work to scribd, it messed up the layout so disregard that. For example my actual resume is just 1 page long.

Do you think I could make it more concise? Expand parts more? any thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

As your resume looks to be pretty basic and just beginning, I suggest you rewrite it with the following tips & tricks. Here is a link http://www.lifeclever.com/give-your-resume-a-face-lift/ If you have decent MS Word experience it won't be too hard. It took me a few hours to rewrite my 2 page resume with all this formatting and people think it was done by a professional but when I tell them that I did it they are really impressed. They even supply a template you can use now to put in your information if that is easier.

Good luck!

I agree with this, the format (even if it got screwed up) is painful to look at.

 

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