How Would You Consider This Cold-Email If Sent to You for an Open Position?
Any comments thankful. : D Appreciate your help! I feel so supported receiving the advices!
Hello FirstName (The Team Lead),
I will keep this email brief as your time is valuable. I found your contact on and I am writing to you about the Trader position at your team.
I graduated from University and worked as a at for years. Now, I am a (relevant role) at , supporting our trading team with (relevant responsibilities) . Though I currently live in , I am originally from (the city where the job is located) and looking to move back.
It is rare to see an opening at your tenured, successful team, and I would regret not reaching out to you personally. Would you mind to schedule a chat this week?
Thank you,
Name
Attachment: Resume
Cut out the “sorry for bothering you” part. Makes you seem unsure about your legitimacy as a candidate. Just own it.
Woo you actually took time to read it and offered nice suggestions! Great idea. I have deleted the part.
Good to be polite but don’t be so submissive, not trying to be rude but you want to still show confidence and self respect
Good idea & other monkeys already agreeing with you! I didnt want to come out as arrogant but instead overplayed politeness...
You got this. Good luck kid
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