Cover Letter Review - Improvement for my cover letter?

Hi everybody,

I´d like to ask if you can give me input and suggest improvements on my cover letter. Basically it is for MM Shops and IB which still have open deadlines.

Thanks.

http://www.razume.com/documents/14079

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all paragraphs. dude it should be like 3-4 paragraphs 2-3 sentences each. u have like 5 run on too

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