PIMCO resume

EDITED RESUME ATTACHED.

I'm applying to PIMCO.

At my last internship, my group did a TON of work with PIMCO funds and I was able to meet many employees/network from there, and learn a lot about the company.

Any shot? I'm gonna go for either Product or Credit Research.\

(With the edits, I took out some results. I feel like my resume needs to show the results though. Not just what I did. Thoughts?)

 

remove italics (make them normal). remove the quest shit. add some spaces. fbis, call it the full name and scrap the abbreviation. instead of vp of marketing, say vice president of marketing. for wall st pilot, dont say learned twice in a row. even if an experience is present, make all verbs past tense. increase margins. too much shit.

gl

 
xypon:
remove italics (make them normal). remove the quest shit. add some spaces. fbis, call it the full name and scrap the abbreviation. instead of vp of marketing, say vice president of marketing. for wall st pilot, dont say learned twice in a row. even if an experience is present, make all verbs past tense. increase margins. too much shit.

gl

To add on to Xypons points i'd also like to mention you should think about using bold on the work experience and important points
 
kyleyboy:
xypon:
remove italics (make them normal). remove the quest shit. add some spaces. fbis, call it the full name and scrap the abbreviation. instead of vp of marketing, say vice president of marketing. for wall st pilot, dont say learned twice in a row. even if an experience is present, make all verbs past tense. increase margins. too much shit.

gl

To add on to Xypons points i'd also like to mention you should think about using bold on the work experience and important points

What do you mean by using bold on work experience for important points? like bolding specific words??

 
Best Response
Prangs:
kyleyboy:
xypon:
remove italics (make them normal). remove the quest shit. add some spaces. fbis, call it the full name and scrap the abbreviation. instead of vp of marketing, say vice president of marketing. for wall st pilot, dont say learned twice in a row. even if an experience is present, make all verbs past tense. increase margins. too much shit.

gl

To add on to Xypons points i'd also like to mention you should think about using bold on the work experience and important points

What do you mean by using bold on work experience for important points? like bolding specific words??

Don't bold the points bold the name of the experience you are about to talk about so it is easy to see the start and end of each experience. They all blended together to me
 
Prangs:
kyleyboy:
xypon:
remove italics (make them normal). remove the quest shit. add some spaces. fbis, call it the full name and scrap the abbreviation. instead of vp of marketing, say vice president of marketing. for wall st pilot, dont say learned twice in a row. even if an experience is present, make all verbs past tense. increase margins. too much shit.

gl

To add on to Xypons points i'd also like to mention you should think about using bold on the work experience and important points

What do you mean by using bold on work experience for important points? like bolding specific words??

Only bold the firm or organization. For example, Morgan Stanley should be in bold, as should every work experience and organization.
 
xypon:
remove italics (make them normal). remove the quest shit. add some spaces. fbis, call it the full name and scrap the abbreviation. instead of vp of marketing, say vice president of marketing. for wall st pilot, dont say learned twice in a row. even if an experience is present, make all verbs past tense. increase margins. too much shit.

gl

Wow I made all those changes and I actually like this formatting 10x better. Could you please take another look about content? I've added the edited version on there. Specifically with respect to my lines about PIMCO because I really like this company and this is a resume I'm tailoring content specifically for their name

 

I second the points above and encourage you to even out your spacing a little bit. The spaces between each section are quite big considering there is no spacing between each position.

"Do not go gentle into that good night"
 

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