Resume Review - Graphic Designer

Hi, i need somebody who knows what they are doing to review my resume and make it better, here is a link to my resume, i took out personal details

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h316/shinigami0…

I dont have alot of professional work experience, im trying to get a job as a graphic designer, 2d/3d artist or something related, but im willing to do pretty much any entry level job that i can do

 

[/quote]I'm very surprised you haven't noticed the Wall Street in wallstreetoasis.com, but I am sure there are better sites for you to post your resume on, where people that are actually in graphic design or what not, can help you.[/quote]

ok thanks, i didnt really know what wall street meant until now lol

 

UGH..where to begin.

1) Please use a template to improve your format

2) You need to QUANTIFY your experiences...I don't care if your only experience is occupying wallstreet...QUANTIFY THAT SHIT

3) Objective statement? srsly bro? GET THAT SHIT OUT OF MY HOUSE

4) Advanced skills include Word, Excel, PowerPoint? Send this statement back to 2000, when I would have cared. This is 2012 BRO

5) Also, what prestigious companies have you worked for? Did you attend any prestigious schools? If not, you're in trouble.

6) You're gonna need to network bro.

 
General Disarray:
UGH..where to begin.

1) Please use template to improve your format

2) You need to QUANTIFY your experiences...I don't care if your only experience is occupying wallstreet...QUANTIFY THAT SHIT

3) Objective statement? srsly bro? GET THAT SHIT OUT OF MY HOUSE

4) Advanced skills include Word, Excel, PowerPoint? Send this statement back to 2000, when I would have cared. This is 2012 BRO

5) Also, what prestigious companies have you worked for? Did you attend any prestigious schools? If not, you're in trouble.

6) You're gonna need to network bro.

I don't think the OP is even trying to break into finance...

 
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General Disarray:
UGH..where to begin.

1) Please use template to improve your format

2) You need to QUANTIFY your experiences...I don't care if your only experience is occupying wallstreet...QUANTIFY THAT SHIT

3) Objective statement? srsly bro? GET THAT SHIT OUT OF MY HOUSE

4) Advanced skills include Word, Excel, PowerPoint? Send this statement back to 2000, when I would have cared. This is 2012 BRO

5) Also, what prestigious companies have you worked for? Did you attend any prestigious schools? If not, you're in trouble.

6) You're gonna need to network bro.

This is all if you're trying to work in finance. TRUST US ALL, if you're not into it, don't even spend the time trying. I don't mean "read the paper every day and watch some youtube videos" interested, I mean "it was my major, I watch market movements and know the difference between IBD and Equity Research" interested.

In short, you're a graphic design guy. Wrong place, wrong idea.

in it 2 win it
 
General Disarray:
UGH..where to begin.

1) Please use template to improve your format

2) You need to QUANTIFY your experiences...I don't care if your only experience is occupying wallstreet...QUANTIFY THAT SHIT

3) Objective statement? srsly bro? GET THAT SHIT OUT OF MY HOUSE

4) Advanced skills include Word, Excel, PowerPoint? Send this statement back to 2000, when I would have cared. This is 2012 BRO

5) Also, what prestigious companies have you worked for? Did you attend any prestigious schools? If not, you're in trouble.

6) You're gonna need to network bro.

This isn't a finance resume so likely 90% of what you said is completely moot

 

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