Resume review - Interested in PE and Hedge Funds

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oreos

Human

HF

11y

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Mr. Hansen:
First bullet - "lOI's" I'm guessing you forget to capitalize the L. Mezzanine funders? Creditors?
3rd PE internship - make sure everything is in the proper tense.

Can remove the "user" after MS Office.

Any specific martial arts?

IOI = indication of interest.

don't capitalise after semi colons, put currency before deal figures

the structure of "selected investment experience" is superfluous - the last two points are sufficient.

top date needs to have -- instead of - to match the others that have --

just curious why you have three different titles for the same type of job? to mix it up a little i assume. were these the official titles of your work experience?

with respect to your first internship: you mention potential deals? the work was over a year ago, would be valuable to get back in contact to check the progress of the deals (and always good to touch base), much better to be able to say that the deals went through

you've made memorandum plural but not thesis, unless there were many memordums for each deal both should be plural.

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Mr. Hansen

King Kong

CO

11y

Oreos:
Mr. Hansen:
First bullet - "lOI's" I'm guessing you forget to capitalize the L. Mezzanine funders? Creditors?
3rd PE internship - make sure everything is in the proper tense.

Can remove the "user" after MS Office.

Any specific martial arts?

IOI = indication of interest.

don't capitalise after semi colons, put currency before deal figures

the structure of "selected investment experience" is superfluous - the last two points are sufficient.

top date needs to have -- instead of - to match the others that have --

just curious why you have three different titles for the same type of job? to mix it up a little i assume. were these the official titles of your work experience?

with respect to your first internship: you mention potential deals? the work was over a year ago, would be valuable to get back in contact to check the progress of the deals (and always good to touch base), much better to be able to say that the deals went through

you've made memorandum plural but not thesis, unless there were many memordums for each deal both should be plural.

Got it. I was thinking Letter of Intent.

Authored by: Certified Consulting Professional - Business SchoolCertified Consulting Pro

seabird

Neanderthal

PE

11y

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