http://www.razume.com/documents/25642
Saved as a PDF so it is now legible in the way it should be - thoughts are appreciated. I considered adding more content to the current role but decided against it until I have actually done more. What should I be targeting? What changes should I make? I do not want to do a masters degree yet. I am interested in PE and HF's.
Thanks in advance.
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| +18 | Feeling behind | 2 | 3d |
| +14 | Delete | 3 | 6d |
| +10 | Physics Major with 3.6 GPA recruiting SA 2028 | 2 | 1d |
| +9 | Startup offer as a graduate | 1 | 6d |
| +9 | Post-MBA IB Analyst - Recommendations for Bulge Bracket Recruiters? | 1 | 1d |
| +9 | 2027 FT IB Recruiting from Private Credit | 4 | 3d |
| +9 | need urgent advice, let go after 1 year should I try for a masters in finance? | 1 | 6d |
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First bullet - "lOI's" I'm guessing you forget to capitalize the L. Mezzanine funders? Creditors?
3rd PE internship - make sure everything is in the proper tense.
Can remove the "user" after MS Office.
Any specific martial arts?
IOI = indication of interest.
don't capitalise after semi colons, put currency before deal figures
the structure of "selected investment experience" is superfluous - the last two points are sufficient.
top date needs to have -- instead of - to match the others that have --
just curious why you have three different titles for the same type of job? to mix it up a little i assume. were these the official titles of your work experience?
with respect to your first internship: you mention potential deals? the work was over a year ago, would be valuable to get back in contact to check the progress of the deals (and always good to touch base), much better to be able to say that the deals went through
you've made memorandum plural but not thesis, unless there were many memordums for each deal both should be plural.
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