Roast my CV - 2021 SA Sales & Trading London

Hi monkeys,

I'm interested in the Sales side of S & T and will be applying for 2021 SA positions within Sales & Trading in London.

Any and all criticism and feedback is very much appreciated - please roast my CV!

https://imgur.com/a/8az2W5x

 
  • Put Education first.
  • Put grades from IB degree, the fact that you haven't listed means they are crap. Are the ones listed High level or standard?
  • Put graduation date on education, not present.
  • Put location on experience.
  • There are formatting errors,
  • mention if the internships are part-time - they appears to be so but its not listed.
  • You go barely any ECs achievements,
  • A lot of inconsistency in formatting, under "IB" education, your bullet point is smaller than the rest for instance
  • write time line of your IB degree, 2014-2016?
 

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