personally? It lacks specifics. It conveys none of your passion. They deal with their clients on a personal basis - you know this how? Call them out on something more specific to them and say how it fits to something specific with you. You're an intern, not a CEO, they arent expecting divine inspiration, but want to know what you can bring to the party, what usually comes from p[eople with no experience is creativity. Is this even a trading role btw?
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its a little bit wordy, try shorting it up some... other then that sounds good
personally? It lacks specifics. It conveys none of your passion. They deal with their clients on a personal basis - you know this how? Call them out on something more specific to them and say how it fits to something specific with you. You're an intern, not a CEO, they arent expecting divine inspiration, but want to know what you can bring to the party, what usually comes from p[eople with no experience is creativity. Is this even a trading role btw?
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Well, they have numerous awards highlighting their commitment to their clients. and its more of a PWM role/ loans.
I thought it showed and highlighted what i can bring to them, what would you suggest?
how can i give specifics if i dont know the company? If they are a good match for you this should be easy. What you're missing is examples.
e.g.. winning the suckoffaclient award demonstrates that you are ahead of the competition.
I enjoy going beyond the expected, as shown when I gave the old lady i mugged a ride home and a refund.
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