Can someone please offer some feedback on my distressed credit pitch?

Hey everyone-- it would be immensely helpful to me if someone with experience in an investment seat could offer some quick feedback on a short pitch I wrote. Not looking for someone to dig into / challenge every number and argument (although that's more than welcome), just a quick skim then offer some feedback such as "add in a __ section", "take this part out", "this part makes absolutely no sense". A final determination of adequacy would be most appreciated; tell me straight up if this is something you would laugh at and immediately delete.

Please pm if willing to help. In return, I would be happy to send you either the 4Q21 L.C.D. leveraged loan report or a Refinit*v distressed market review from December.