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Looks fantastic - only suggestions would be to remove the hyperlink on your email (blue and underlining) and add 'City, UK' for location of university
You also have different size dashes between dates, i.e. CAS Team has longer one than all the rest, make sure you're consistent
Thank you so much for the response! Damn, did not even realise that one dash. On my actual one (with my name and everything), I got the address of my school as, eg. Manchester, England. Should that be changed to Manchester, United Kingdom perhaps? Thanks again!
Your interests make you sound a little autistic.
5th generation fighter jets??
You want stuff that helps you relate to people or be conversation starters. Tropical snorkeling or street food are not going to really do that.
Think the interests you actually pursue on a regular basis (sports, music, hobbies etc.)
Thank you for the tip. I can see now why those were not the best words to use. Will make them better. Thanks 🙏
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