Best way to thank contacts after getting an offer?

After networking with dozens of bankers/analysts/etc, I got an offer at a BB AM shop. A lot of the people I talked to were incredibly helpful and people who I want to keep in contact with in the future. What is the best way to let them know I got a job while not bragging?

Heres a template I thought of already:

subject; Recruiting Update

Hi Name

Hope all is well! I just wanted to thank you again for all your time and advice, I found it very helpful for my [job search/interview/]. I also wanted to let you know that I recently got a job at [BB AM] and will be starting in [start date]. Hopefully we have the chance to work together in the future.

Hope to keep in touch going forward,

[my name]

 
ftanalyst2013:
I just wanted to thank you again for all your time and advice, I found it very helpful for my [job search/interview/].
This is grammatically incorrect. Put a period or semicolon after the word "advice."
 

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