Can someone please read my thank you letter?

Is anyone around to review a few thank you emails I intend to send today? This is for a business development position. I've always thought my letters were lacking in content, or maybe too much, so I was hoping to get other eyes on them.

Please let me know, and I can PM them to you. Thanks in advance.

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General rule: short and concise with one or two sentences that talk about something unique (so it doesn't come across as a template)

Please don't quote Patrick Bateman.
 

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