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you need to adjust format... parentheses, capital letters, alignment, - / , etc. for instance [06/2011] - [08-2011] and [10/2009 - [04/2010]

 
thejokeryou need to adjust format... parentheses, capital letters, alignment, - / , etc. for instance [06/2011] - [08-2011] and [10/2009 - [04/2010]

ok will do thanks.

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This is just fucking awful. Go through this again by yourself, because this shit is straight up sloppy. If this is your best attempt, then maybe you should look into other careers. No one is going to do your work for you.

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FlakeThis is just fucking awful. Go through this again by yourself, because this shit is straight up sloppy. If this is your best attempt, then maybe you should look into other careers. No one is going to do your work for you.
Fuck you pussy. Take you bitching elsewhere.
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BankMonkey21
FlakeThis is just fucking awful. Go through this again by yourself, because this shit is straight up sloppy. If this is your best attempt, then maybe you should look into other careers. No one is going to do your work for you.
Fuck you pussy. Take you bitching elsewhere.

to be fair, your resume is incredibly sloppy....and you did ask people to "destroy it"

don't really understand why people ask for resume critiques when there are basic grammar/formatting issues all over the place

 
Best Response

Like the above said, there are quite a few formatting issues here. Some that I noticed with a quick glance:

  • You have periods in some lines but not in others
  • What's with all the brackets?
  • Capitalize "Excel" in your second to last bullet for your first listed PVH Corp internship
  • Uncapitalize "analyzed" in your first bullet for your second listed PVH Corp internship
  • Capitalize "Product" in "Banking Product Specialist"
  • Is there an extra space in front of "necessary" in the first bullet of the Taking the First Step Program?
  • In general, your bullets are job descriptions as opposed to explanations on how you added value or what the result of your analysis was

There are plenty of other ways to improve this, take some time to carefully comb through line by line to make sure formatting is consistent. Best of luck.

 
South Sea TulipLike the above said, there are quite a few formatting issues here. Some that I noticed with a quick glance:
  • You have periods in some lines but not in others
  • What's with all the brackets?
  • Capitalize "Excel" in your second to last bullet for your first listed PVH Corp internship
  • Uncapitalize "analyzed" in your first bullet for your second listed PVH Corp internship
  • Capitalize "Product" in "Banking Product Specialist"
  • Is there an extra space in front of "necessary" in the first bullet of the Taking the First Step Program?
  • In general, your bullets are job descriptions as opposed to explanations on how you added value or what the result of your analysis was

There are plenty of other ways to improve this, take some time to carefully comb through line by line to make sure formatting is consistent. Best of luck.

Thanks. I appreciate it
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