Destroy IT
Fellas,
Take a look and tell me what you think. Looking to get into IB or AM this summer.
Fellas,
Take a look and tell me what you think. Looking to get into IB or AM this summer.
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Why does everybody put proficient in word, excel, ppt? DONT DO THAT IT LOOKS STUPID
ok so if i take it off will it be assumed that I already know it? Anything else? Good or bad?
you need to adjust format... parentheses, capital letters, alignment, - / , etc. for instance [06/2011] - [08-2011] and [10/2009 - [04/2010]
ok will do thanks.
add spaces in technical skills, capitalize "martial" and "jersey", I dont know what INROADS is,
This is just fucking awful. Go through this again by yourself, because this shit is straight up sloppy. If this is your best attempt, then maybe you should look into other careers. No one is going to do your work for you.
to be fair, your resume is incredibly sloppy....and you did ask people to "destroy it"
don't really understand why people ask for resume critiques when there are basic grammar/formatting issues all over the place
Like the above said, there are quite a few formatting issues here. Some that I noticed with a quick glance:
There are plenty of other ways to improve this, take some time to carefully comb through line by line to make sure formatting is consistent. Best of luck.
technical skills are things like c++, eviews, etc. not fucking bloomberg. just say "proficient in..." How did you compare things? p/e ratios etc? I wouldn't give this resume a second look.
might want to reconsider the interests section - "motorcycles"??
Just completely remove the interests section unless you have something completely off-the-hook which you can talk about for two hours to a complete stranger.
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