Hi xxx,
My name is xxx and I am a sophomore at xxx. I found your contact information through the alumni database.
I am interested in the investment banking industry and would love to learn about your career path and experience at xxx. Would you be willing to hop on the phone for a quick call in the next week or so? I'd be happy to find a time that works best for your schedule.
I really appreciate your time and consideration and look forward to hearing from you soon!
Best,
xxx
I wouldn’t respond
Why
Why the comma after your name? I’d remove “rising” and “highly”
Ok appreciate the feedback!
Personally disagree, helps clarify in the summer
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